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Post by r wesley edwards on Aug 15, 2013 1:51:28 GMT -8
I love this subject, let me start by saying that.
OK, so what we have here is an unreliable narrator whose subject is an unreliable character. So a snarky, off-the-cuff journalist describing someone who can't tell dreams from reality.
But the narrator isn't lying, and isn't subject to the flights of fancy that Tyzmon takes off on. The narrator is only untrustworthy when describing things Tyzmon accepts as reality.
Hopefully, I won't fuck it up and it'll be a fun ride. -r -=-
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Post by tongotongo on Aug 18, 2013 19:44:46 GMT -8
This double entendre on two levels could be a bit complicated. Tyzmon is obviously day dreaming regarding Truth, but in any other situations as well? If you want to confuse the audience, fine, but if you need the audience to stay on top of things, this double trick could prove to be difficult.
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Post by r wesley edwards on Aug 18, 2013 20:03:48 GMT -8
***ADMIN/Author***I'll have to be at the top of my game.  -r PS: Not a double trick, just a compounding of complications. Not all that different from how things happen outside books. -=-
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